The night,
Sighed in sorrow,
for fate, again had struck,
Its wounded heart with another,
Harsh blow.
#cinquain
akyllus
mute visual mind, a head full of thoughts, struggling, to find the right words.
The night,
Sighed in sorrow,
for fate, again had struck,
Its wounded heart with another,
Harsh blow.
#cinquain
akyllus 
Thank you, Pieter
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Lovely metaphors.. very nice poetry 🙂
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Wonderful!
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Thank you, Sumyanna. (Btw. Is Sumyanna your name or is it a blog title?).
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You’re welcome. It is my penname😊
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Thank you, Pieter.
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Oh dear…
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Haahaa. Stella .
Its just poetry my dear.
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🙂 ❤
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Haahaa .. wonderful reaction.
Its just poetry Stella.
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Oh thank goodness! You know what a worrier I am, by now 🙂 ❤
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I’m not part of facebook.
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Short, sweet, and to the point. Yet. . . . . .poetically said. Loved the way you penned that.
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Thank you
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