I dreamt,
I am your soul,
But then I wake and find,
That I am, still the beggar at
Your door.
#cinquain
akyllus
mute visual mind, a head full of thoughts, struggling, to find the right words.
I dreamt,
I am your soul,
But then I wake and find,
That I am, still the beggar at
Your door.
#cinquain
akyllus 
I liked the idea of the soul being the beggar at one’s door.
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Thanks
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A great little poem. Bravo.
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beautiful, simply awesome, “Every heart sings a song, incomplete, until another heart whispers back.” … these are my songs and whispers.
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Thank you, Ashok.
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Reblogged this on Travel.
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Thank you for the reblog.
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Absolutely my pleasure to share your writing on my blog.:)
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Wonderful…!
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Thank you, Seb.
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Very nice. I can find a lot of treasure in your blog. Thank you for liking my one syllable poem and the follow. Will visit more of your.
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Thank you.
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I’m glad you liked the poem Rajiv.
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Wow. This is amazing
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Nice Cinquain poetry. I haven’t written any yet but I’m very interested in learning the right way to do it.
Three months ago I got caught up with writing Tanka Poems, I enjoy writing them.
Thanks for following me. Hope you are having a great week.
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Thank you
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You’re welcome, Leelah. And thank you for the wonderful comment.
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beautiful, precious lines- and thank you for following my blog
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This is beautiful.
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Thank you. Am happy you liked the poem.
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Brief but filled with so much emotions
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A deep message conveyed simply.Beautiful 🙂
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Thank you, Shahz. Its like you walked into my mind.
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Pleasure is mine 🙂
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So good and so concise!! Love it!!
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Thank you
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Sweet melancholy…
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Thank you, Kamalini. I was reading Afghan LANDAY poetry and got inspired.
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